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Post by jaredthrob on Dec 9, 2006 21:53:27 GMT -5
Hey all of you are are poets and do or don't know it, this thread is for you!! Post any original work you would like to share with the group here. With that, I'll start it off with a little ditty I wrote a few years back. Untitled....
Revitalize, initialize and scan the morning shore
For old men lost on thoughtful walks, what are they looking for?
And when my eyes are shining in the putrid morning light
Look out my dear, a fog's rolled in, you're in for quite a fright
For on the 'morrow you and I shall sail into the sun
And when our ashes fill the air my work will have been done
For oh what a wonderful puzzle we are
Said the lovers, the dreamers, and me
We dance in the light of the moon and stars
And sleep under shurikan trees
And oh what a grand old tradition we keep
Said the foolish, the brave, and the strong
We sleep through each day while finding a way
To never admit we were wrong
Alright, you guys take it from there, post anything you like! Have fun! ;D
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Post by Cody McClain on Dec 9, 2006 22:05:46 GMT -5
well... Danielle is the only one here who has read this... wait... nope.. Joe too... lol but I wrote it on the first day of school, cause the last like... 5 minutes.... went by WAY too slow... and I wanted to just leave... or die.... lol
Here I am
Trapped in this prison
Every tick of the clock taunts me
And leaves me helplessly lost
With nothing left to give
I begin to fall apart
My Sentence is nearly over,
But it's too far to feel safe
For safety comes in measures,
But none that I can follow
I am alone and hopeless
But that is a familiar feeling...
I long for absolution
But I take what I can get
All I have is a thought,
A plan if you will...
I plan to escape
Just to see a familiar face
With ten minutes to go
The worst is all behind me
I see the end is near,
But I can't seem to find it
I'm stuck inside this maze
With only the music to guide me
The feeling sinks in
As my time nears it's end........
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and that's as far as I got before I packed my stuff and walked out of the room cause I couldn't stand sitting there anymore... lol it's not great, but it's the only thing I have.... lol so like it or not... it's there.....
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Post by Danielle on Dec 10, 2006 14:41:58 GMT -5
cody, you need to write more poems cuz your good at it ok? ok
same goes for jared too
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Post by Cody McClain on Dec 10, 2006 15:43:39 GMT -5
lol alright, if you say so...
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Post by Alexa Newell on Dec 12, 2006 19:24:54 GMT -5
He Pressures You
Pushing. Kissing. Hugging. Hitting
He Tells You He Needs You..That he loves you.
He is a model Of the Newest Creation
When Love is a simple as a board Game
And a Kiss Means Nothing.
He makes you Feel Worthless..Leads you With lies
He wraps you in Bedsheets, and smothers you.
You Cry.
Hes gone for the moment, and Back in a Flash
Stricking a Pose
Of A Lover Once Had
He doesnt Love, Feel, Or Care
Your Just Another Body that He Cant Spare
He'll show you some mercy and Let you find Out
That He used another Just like You..
She doesnt understand and She thinks hes great,
you already know its way to late.
Her lack of intelligence and advanced lust
Makes her quick on her feet..and into his arms
You smile and Walk
Away With Those Fears
Let Her be The Next Victim
Of A Faithless Fear
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Post by jaredthrob on Dec 14, 2006 1:22:06 GMT -5
A short little ditty, but here goes, wrote it about 6 years ago..
A Midsummer Night's Regret:
One hundred-thousand words of wisdom
Etched on broken glass
The bleeding ears of little children
Sheltered from the blast
I've got nowhere to hide you and
No-one's left to look
I guess it doesn't always pay
To do things by the book
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